【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ ^1 {6 H; O7 Y9 ~* i& R  DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 i$ s: `7 r" H- ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 l( R- n4 k$ V" ~6 j/ qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, G/ q2 E- X8 g* k% \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 ?' M" L9 w; s9 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, z+ ~) [2 W* n1 o* ]4 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* E" ^5 |' p# B3 O/ w3 UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; T2 }8 t4 L" o5 P. D6 f* K0 fI want so much to see inside your heart
3 ?1 _- ~* s5 {1 ~& EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" j( u' ?3 S6 Q! d5 ~I’m still filled with fear
  u7 `& g1 B; I+ X4 b  J, aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, j3 O4 l5 _7 o1 R8 ?4 w' G. H' @I regret not dying
! k2 }. w, N! W" |6 z4 s; }2 ]* d. sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* r4 _' f3 N0 }0 s% P. e! y+ {6 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
( \9 M3 v% R8 ]" J0 I* k, xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ v# L6 L$ ]' r0 N( e3 K. NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' m4 k' {5 [% l0 n% C% ~' M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, g/ h# o9 H% u$ s, N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 N  D0 @) j) M* ^7 m' h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 S7 Q6 K( A- B7 _1 C  P8 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( b% u) O% {* p" N% W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. `! z6 K  ?" S0 Y3 j6 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 ]+ g* g: `. y& c7 Q6 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  E$ b4 p3 T8 l5 ^. L6 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ _. m- p1 q. @% |( k9 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 Q+ e! n& w5 \<P>你无需担心</P>
; C, Y' k4 S6 L  X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! B1 u: ^% q- d: T) W+ a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. ?! F8 i# i6 S' R% r+ G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! R3 ^8 U8 |3 r2 |0 H! B' M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ D2 P" d* X! X4 \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' u4 u2 ~0 n- f. l. Q' X3 R* n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( m. o2 h7 }5 ?* a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% M; _" r# q, i8 t  C! X" x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ y) q6 Q' Z+ [; ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" H+ ^8 ]) C4 M0 y* v0 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 q% D& n3 t& c- r0 {( I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- K) L4 z$ h+ D, R4 {& [. n+ W% d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, A, j  k) e0 B/ a1 \# b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 K$ x8 g7 C* m  ]- O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& L& R; I& N0 H, R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>